Comments for A Diary of a Writer http://tsfranklin.com Follow the journey of my first novel. Wed, 11 Aug 2010 03:39:35 +0000 hourly 1 http://wordpress.com/ Comment on Voices in My Head by TSFranklin http://tsfranklin.com/2010/08/10/voices-in-my-head/#comment-216 TSFranklin Wed, 11 Aug 2010 03:39:35 +0000 http://tsfranklin.com/?p=226#comment-216 That is great feedback! Thank you, I'm always interested in how others accomplish this. ~T.S. That is great feedback! Thank you, I’m always interested in how others accomplish this.
~T.S.

]]> Comment on Voices in My Head by Morrighan http://tsfranklin.com/2010/08/10/voices-in-my-head/#comment-215 Morrighan Tue, 10 Aug 2010 23:55:59 +0000 http://tsfranklin.com/?p=226#comment-215 T.S., The one thing that has helped me (along with plenty of feedback from my editor, friend, and family) is that the conversations need to be natural for you; to ebb and flow as if you and another were talking. After my novel was published, I noticed some u with my characters as they conversed as well (along with timeline issues, albeit minor ones). Try not to rush or push the flow, these details will be easily picked up by the reader. Now, I’m unsure if you were looking for feedback or merely placing your thoughts on this blog. If the later, then please forgive my forwardness. ~Morrighan T.S.,

The one thing that has helped me (along with plenty of feedback from my editor, friend, and family) is that the conversations need to be natural for you; to ebb and flow as if you and another were talking. After my novel was published, I noticed some u with my characters as they conversed as well (along with timeline issues, albeit minor ones). Try not to rush or push the flow, these details will be easily picked up by the reader.

Now, I’m unsure if you were looking for feedback or merely placing your thoughts on this blog. If the later, then please forgive my forwardness.

~Morrighan

]]> Comment on A New Story, An Unwritten Ending by Leo A. Geis http://tsfranklin.com/2010/07/20/a-new-story/#comment-214 Leo A. Geis Tue, 20 Jul 2010 19:35:49 +0000 http://tsfranklin.com/?p=220#comment-214 Very engaging write, Travis! Very engaging write, Travis!

]]> Comment on 8 Years Later: My life after cancer by Leo A. Geis http://tsfranklin.com/2010/02/18/8-years-later/#comment-195 Leo A. Geis Sat, 20 Feb 2010 23:32:15 +0000 http://tsfranklin.com/?p=197#comment-195 Feeling great for you! Skiing with you only makes the victory sweeter, you know! Feeling great for you! Skiing with you only makes the victory sweeter, you know!

]]> Comment on 8 Years Later: My life after cancer by Dana D. http://tsfranklin.com/2010/02/18/8-years-later/#comment-194 Dana D. Fri, 19 Feb 2010 18:23:17 +0000 http://tsfranklin.com/?p=197#comment-194 Incredible. I feel bad...but I never even knew. I'm glad we reconnected, but sad we didn't see you at the reunion. I've known you for more than 20 years...but I guess I really didn't KNOW you until now. Wow, Trav, you are one tough dude. Congrats on 8 years!!!!! Incredible. I feel bad…but I never even knew. I’m glad we reconnected, but sad we didn’t see you at the reunion. I’ve known you for more than 20 years…but I guess I really didn’t KNOW you until now. Wow, Trav, you are one tough dude. Congrats on 8 years!!!!!

]]> Comment on 8 Years Later: My life after cancer by Angie http://tsfranklin.com/2010/02/18/8-years-later/#comment-193 Angie Fri, 19 Feb 2010 04:38:33 +0000 http://tsfranklin.com/?p=197#comment-193 I'm so grateful to have friends like you in my life, you are an inspiration and quite fantastic! I’m so grateful to have friends like you in my life, you are an inspiration and quite fantastic!

]]> Comment on 8 Years Later: My life after cancer by Erica Jensen http://tsfranklin.com/2010/02/18/8-years-later/#comment-192 Erica Jensen Thu, 18 Feb 2010 20:41:33 +0000 http://tsfranklin.com/?p=197#comment-192 Congrats, Travis. That's an awesome milestone. Congrats, Travis. That’s an awesome milestone.

]]> Comment on 8 Years Later: My life after cancer by agboise http://tsfranklin.com/2010/02/18/8-years-later/#comment-190 agboise Thu, 18 Feb 2010 19:49:52 +0000 http://tsfranklin.com/?p=197#comment-190 Travis-you my friend are one of those people I just put "up there" and by that I mean, I hold you in high esteem. Thanks for sharing. Alex Travis-you my friend are one of those people I just put “up there” and by that I mean, I hold you in high esteem. Thanks for sharing.

Alex

]]> Comment on 8 Years Later: My life after cancer by Mel Cleland http://tsfranklin.com/2010/02/18/8-years-later/#comment-189 Mel Cleland Thu, 18 Feb 2010 18:29:32 +0000 http://tsfranklin.com/?p=197#comment-189 So great. Thanks for sharing. =) So great. Thanks for sharing. =)

]]> Comment on 8 Years Later: My life after cancer by Brandy http://tsfranklin.com/2010/02/18/8-years-later/#comment-188 Brandy Thu, 18 Feb 2010 18:16:01 +0000 http://tsfranklin.com/?p=197#comment-188 Very inspiring. Nothing is more refreshing (and scary) than a paradigm shift. =) Very inspiring. Nothing is more refreshing (and scary) than a paradigm shift. =)

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